Formal and Informal Language
for Letters and Emails
Improving your Writing
In this section:
An overview of appropriate language to use in letters
When writing letters, it’s important to use the correct tone. Examiners will take your tone into consideration when marking your work.
Setting the tone
When writing a letter or email, you must consider your audience and change your tone accordingly. For example, the language you use to write your boss should be different than the language you use when writing a friend. You'll need to do this in the real world and Cambridge examiners are judging your ability to do it on the exam.
In general, we can say:
Formal writing should make you sound more professional, more intelligent, and impressive.
Informal writing should make you sound more casual, friendlier, and laid back.
Read the two examples below and note the difference between the tone and language used:
Formal letter:
I am writing in regards to the call requesting reviews of favourite restaurants as published in the January edition of your Travel Magazine.
Informal letter:
I hope you're doing well. As you know, John's birthday is coming up next month and I thought it'd be fun to throw a surprise party for him.
There's a few basic guidelines we can follow for a Cambridge exam to achieve the correct tone, without going to extremes.
When writing informal tasks:
You cannot completely relax and write as if you were text messaging a friend in real life. Your grammar and spelling still must be correct on your exam and you cannot swear or use slang like you might with your friends.
Never use abbreviations like luv, bcuz, wanna or gonna.
Do not use acronyms like ‘LOL’ or ‘OMG’.
Do not include emoticons. 🙂
When writing informal tasks:
Don't try to use over-the-top, antiquated language or phrases
Aim to write simple, professional communications instead like you might in a business context
When writing a letter, you also do not need to write the address.
Writing your letter
As I mentioned, in formal letters it's common to write longer phrases that make the writer seem more intelligent and professional. On the other hand, when writing informal letters the writer would use phrases which are more direct, so the tone is more casual and friendly.
Some examples:
Informal
Thanks so much for your help!
Can we get together sometime this week to chat about this?
Unfortunately I'm going to have to skip this one.
Feel free to give me a shout if you need more information.
Formal
I am writing to thank you for your assistance.
I am writing to request a meeting with you to further discuss this matter.
Regrettably, I must cancel this time.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information.
Note that, depending on the context, we also may need to use formal language in informal situations. For example, if you are asking someone for a favour, or if you have a request, you should use a slightly formal tone so you sound polite and not rude.
Informal and Rude
I need to borrow some money from you.
Come over at 8:00.
I really need you to come take care of my cat next week because I need to go out of town for work.
Informal but Polite
I was wondering if you could lend me some money?
I was thinking you could come over at 8:00.
I was hoping you could take care of my cat next week as I'll be out of town on business.
Using Contractions
Contractions are used to make words shorter or to combine two words together: It’s (contraction) = It is (without contraction)
You should not use contractions in formal writing. However, they are often used in informal writing so use them in your informal letters or other pieces of informal writing.
Informal
I'd love to meet up with you for lunch next week.
We've recently started some new, exciting projects.
Unfortunately I can't attend the dinner because they've scheduled me to work that night.
Formal
I would greatly enjoy meeting you for lunch next week.
We have recently begun working on several promising new endeavors.
I unfortunately cannot attend the dinner as I have been informed of changes to my work schedule.
Using Phrasal Verbs
Phrasal verbs are generally considered informal. When writing formally, it's best to use normal verbs or phrases instead.
Phrasal verbs are verbs which are pared with either prepositions or adverbs that have specific idiomatic meanings.
Informal
I'll be getting in at 7:00.
I can pick you up at the airport at 2:00.
If you want, I can drop in for a bit on Saturday.
Formal
I will arrive at 7:00.
I can collect you at the airport at 2:00.
If you're available, I can visit you for a while on Saturday.
Modal Verbs
Modal verbs can be used to lesson the tone of requests and demands. Remember, that the "past" version of modals (could, would, should, etc.) sound more polite than the "present" version (can, will, shall etc.)
Informal
Unfortunately I have to cancel.
You can come over at 5 if you want.
Can I borrow your car?
Formal
Regrettably, I must cancel.
I was thinking you could come over at 5 if that works for you.
I was wondering if I would be able to borrow your car?
Examples of Language
Signing on and Signing off
Informal
Hi Dave,
Hey Dave,
Dear Dave,
See you soon,
Take care,
All the best,
Formal
Dear Sir / Madam,
Dear Mr. Robson,
Dear John Robson,
Faithfully yours,
Sincerely yours,
Note:
You should use "Sir / Madam'' when you don't know the name of the person you are writing. You'd use this title when writing to the manager of a grocery store or to your local council, for example. However, you do not use these titles when you know the person's name. Also: do not use these titles on your speaking test.
You can also write a formal letter to someone whose name you know. You can either use "Mr. Robson" or "John Robson" as shown in the examples.
Do not use a title or last name when writing to a friend.
Openers
Informal
I'm just writing to let you know...
I'm writing to tell you about...
Formal
I am writing this letter with regard to...
I am writing to bring to your attention...
I am writing to inform you that...
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
Expressing satisfaction
Informal
I'm so happy to hear that...
I'm thrilled to hear that...
I'm so excited to hear about...
Formal
I am delighted to hear that...
It brings me great pleasure to hear that...
Making a request or suggestion
Informal
Any chance you could...
Would it be possible to...
I'd be really grateful if you could...
I was wondering if you could give me a hand with...
Would you mind...
I was wondering if you could do me a favour?
Formal
I would be grateful if you would...
I would like you to...
I would like to request that you...
I was wondering if it would be at all possible to...
I would like to suggest that...
It would greatly help me if you could...
I would really appreciate it if you could...
Apologizing
Informal
I’m really sorry about…..
I'm really sorry for...
I’d like to apologize for…
Formal
Please accept my sincerest apologies for....
I would like to express my apologies for...
Could you please forgive me for...
Giving bad news
Informal
I’m afraid I have some bad news for you.
I’m sorry to tell you that...
I'm sorry but...
Formal
I regret to inform you that...
I regret to advise you that...
Regrettably, I must...
I am sorry to inform you that...
Ending
Informal
All the best.
Keep in touch.
Talk soon.
See you soon.
Formal
I look forward to hearing from you.
I look forward to receiving your response.
I thank you so much for your consideration.
I await your prompt reply.
Please respond at your earliest convenience.
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Here are some more examples of informal and formal sentences expressing the same idea so you can compare them:
Informal
I'll be able to come get you at the train station.
How about we meet on Thursday?
Why don't you pop over for something to eat on Wednesday?
It would be fantastic if you could come in July.
Please get back to me as soon as you can.
Sorry, but I can't make it.
Formal
I will be available to collect you at the train station.
My next available appointment is on Thursday.
I would like to invite you to have dinner at my home on Wednesday.
I highly recommend that you come in July.
Please respond at your earliest convenience.
Unfortunately, I will not be able to attend.
Knowing what's formal and informal
A good dictionary will tell you if a word or phrases is formal or informal. However, at a certain point, double-checking every single word becomes impractical.
A quick way to find out if the words you know are formal or informal is by checking out lists online.
Note: do not learn vocabulary from lists. You need to learn vocabulary in context instead. This is just a quick way to double check the words you already know.