Writing Part 1
Practice Essay 3
B2 First Exam
Essay
Here's an example of an essay that you might find on the B2 First Exam.
Try answering the question first, and then check out my answer. I've left my planning and notes for you as well.
The question:
In your English class you have been talking about different ways in which you can protect the environment. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
What can people do to help protect the environment?
Notes
Write about:
recycle
using bicycles and walking
…………… (your own idea)
140 - 190 words
Planning
Brainstorming:
Substitutes words - synonyms - environment - the planet // help - aide
Change the word form - Nouns - Adjective - Verbs - environment // environmental // help / helping / helpful
Concession - State the opposite opinion of what you want to say, and then say what you want to say .
Change the word order of the original statement
Introductory Paragraph
Paraphrase of the original question
Thesis statement that outlines the three points
Opinion
Recycling
Reference the point
recycling plastic
less plastic clogging up the oceans and waterways
Using bikes and walking
Referencing the point
Cities that invest in this kind of infrastructure report to have 30% less emissions than cities without
Reducing air pollution - C02 emissions
Fashion
Reference the point
Focus on sustainable clothing practices - using secondhand shops
Less clothing in landfills - 90percent of all clothing ends up in landfills
Conclusion
Restate the three points
Restate the opinion
No new information
Example Answer
A lot of people believe that there is nothing to be done to safeguard the planet. However, there are actually many things that every day people can do such as recycling, using alternative forms of transportation, and reusing clothes that can protect the environment.
To begin with, every day people can find ways of recycling their trash instead of contributing to the waste problem. For example, most plastics can be recycled or repurposed for other uses. As a consequence, less trash ends up in waterways and it doesn’t clog the oceans.
Another thing most people can do is walking and biking. These are modes of transportation available to almost everyone. Using these alternative forms of transport significantly reduces the amount of CO2 emitted into the atmosphere. In fact, cities that invest in this kind of infrastructure report having 30% less emissions than cities without.
Finally, almost 90% of all clothing ends up in landfills instead of being recycled. People can donate their clothing instead or find other ways of fixing and extending the life of their garments. This, in the end, can greatly reduce the amount of waste in landfills.
In conclusion, there are many things the average person can do, such as reusing clothing, recycling plastic, and walking and biking to reduce their environmental footprint.